July 8th, 2003

A Pocket Full of Murder

Just to give you an idea...

...of the kinds of revisions I actually ended up making to TPMA, the OotP-related stuff was actually the least of it. Doing this gave me the chance to fix a couple of continuity errors, some wobbly characterization, and overwritten passages that had been bothering me even before Book 5 came out.

So the keen-eyed reader will now observe that: Collapse )

I'm still not completely happy with the story in the light of OotP -- I'd need to do a lot more actual rewriting and reimagining of scenes for that -- but at least I've fixed all the obvious discrepancies. Or at least I hope I have.